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Post by Lestat on Sun Dec 07, 2014 9:26 pm


There they are
the ghosts of friends departed
of love ones lost
and soldiers gone

I see them in the wall
in straight lines they stand
with comrades and friends

What do they see
do they see the wall
and remember those who lived
as I stand and see those who died

I hear their voices, curses and laughter
perhaps they hear the sobbing and silence
or maybe, they are just a memory?

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Post by MissBijou on Mon Dec 08, 2014 7:03 am

It's good! I immediately thought of those commemorative walls that they have for soldiers who've fallen in battle. I imagine that this is what you are referring to.

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Post by Lestat on Mon Dec 08, 2014 11:09 pm

I Could be, Melanie.

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Post by Yume on Tue Feb 03, 2015 6:52 pm

Lestat wrote:
There they are
the ghosts of friends departed
of love ones lost
...
I imagined the ghost of Magnus who came to you in material form in the latest book...

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