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Autophobia

Post by MissBijou on Fri Jan 02, 2015 3:45 am

I really don't consider myself to have a knack for poetry, but this is something I wrote about... 5 years ago. I actually still like this one.
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Autophobia

A parasite stretches and stirs

Black malignant thoughts

The sunlight brightly burns



Tearful eyes flinch away

From the harsh light

The coming light of day



The act of being healed

Sometimes, hurts even more

Than any lie concealed



A dirty mirror reflects a lie

a battered human form

But, underneath, a soul shy

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Re: Autophobia

Post by Erin-Elizabeth on Fri Jan 02, 2015 6:05 am

Beautiful, Melanie. *hugs* I think you've got more than a knack.

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Post by Nia on Fri Jan 02, 2015 6:06 am

That is really beautiful, Melanie. As Erin said, you have more than a knack. Simply beautiful.

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Post by MissBijou on Fri Jan 02, 2015 6:37 pm

Thank you, ladies! >^^<

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Re: Autophobia

Post by Victor on Mon Jan 12, 2015 3:25 am

Very good, MissBijou. i think you should write more.

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Re: Autophobia

Post by Yume on Wed Jan 21, 2015 10:01 pm

Very good, Melany!! Especially the title - so close to my own thoughts...

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Post by Lestat on Wed Jan 21, 2015 11:05 pm

Bravo, Melanie. Thank you for sharing.
You should certainly continue to write.

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Re: Autophobia

Post by MissBijou on Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:43 am

Many thanks to everyone. I'd post more, but I am touchy about everything being just "right". I don't like sharing what I've written. :/

But thanks for the encouragement.

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