Lost

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Lost

Post by Nia on Sun Jan 18, 2015 8:03 am

Lost...

Lost on a raging sea.
With nothing to guide me.
Nothing above,
nothing below.

So I circle and hold on as best I can,
but my strength is waning fast and faster still.
Soon enough, I shall have nothing to hold me
above the turmoil and I shall drown...

Into the abyss I shall sink.
My last breath,
a silent scream.
Arrest my ability to think.

Tossed into nothingness,
I shall become,
one with the darkness
It shall have its fun.

Castaway. Cast away far from home,
No more time for woe,
Castaway, cast away.
How much longer must one roam?

_________________
avatar
Nia
Admin
Admin

Posts : 238
Join date : 2014-12-12

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by MissBijou on Sun Jan 18, 2015 8:23 pm

I love the lost at sea theme running through this. >^^< Well done.

_________________
avatar
MissBijou
Respected Member
Respected Member

Posts : 175
Join date : 2014-11-16
Age : 33
Location : Denver

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Lestat on Sun Jan 18, 2015 11:41 pm

Nicely written, Nia. Keep up the good work.

_________________


[EVERY NOW AND THEN, I demand to be treated like the supernatural hero that I am.]
avatar
Lestat
Administrator
Administrator

Posts : 410
Join date : 2014-05-12
Location : Closer than you think.

View user profile http://lestat.forumotion.co.uk

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Louis on Tue Jan 20, 2015 9:23 pm

Bravo Nia. Please let us see more.

_________________


Forgive me if I have a lingering respect for mortal life.
avatar
Louis
De Pointe du Lac
De Pointe du Lac

Posts : 61
Join date : 2014-05-18

View user profile http://lestat.forumotion.co.uk

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Erin-Elizabeth on Tue Jan 20, 2015 10:03 pm

<3

_________________
avatar
Erin-Elizabeth
Admin
Admin

Posts : 308
Join date : 2014-08-16
Age : 28

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Nia on Wed Jan 21, 2015 1:44 am

Thank you all for the lovely compliments. I shall be showing you all more as the days progress.

_________________
avatar
Nia
Admin
Admin

Posts : 238
Join date : 2014-12-12

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Yume on Wed Jan 21, 2015 9:52 pm

It was super, Nia. The picture you described I'd seen once in my dream...

_________________
avatar
Yume
Respected Member
Respected Member

Posts : 189
Join date : 2015-01-09
Location : France

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Lost

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum